On September 22nd 2014 around 1:50PM a young 3rd grade boy ran into a door in gym class. No one caught his name. He was excited to go back to his normal classes so he ran as fast as he could out that door. but before he could stop he ran right into another door.this little boy didn't cry or whine, nope he stood up straight looked around for a second and walked right out.
Lauren Gann a former student at PCS said "Oh wow and he didn't get hurt at all? if that was me i would have just sat there and cried". You could tell hat he was so full of energy by the way he couldn't stay still sitting in the gym before he came racing into the other door in the hallway.
what is this story about but its good so far.
ReplyDeleteit was good that is all i have to say
ReplyDeleteThe newscast was good overall but what was the message you were trying to give off. You also need to go back and capitilize most words.
ReplyDeleteI liked the thought of this newscast, but maybe make it a little longer next time. Also there were a few punctuation mistakes, but everybody makes mistakes! Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was really funny, I smiled a lot throughout this newscast. However, there are a couple of grammar errors and you should try to convey a theme or message as Legacy said.
ReplyDeleteThis was funny. I wasn't expecting to hear that! Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis was intresing and funny I enjoyed it a lot.
ReplyDeletethat kid is awesome.how fast was he running when he ran into the other kid?
ReplyDeleteI like how you had a lot of detail, and I remember that, it came out of nowhere. Kids are very wild these days and that was very loud when he ran bumped into the door.
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