On September 8th,2014 there was a fight at Chrysty park between two boys.They were fighting because one of the kids asked if he can get and the other one said no.The fight started because the other kid pushed him off the swing ,then he got up and punched the dude in the face.They both just started hitting each other.Then the kid who got pushed to the ground knocked the other kid to the ground and started stomping him in the dirt.Next one of the kids mom came out of her car and ran down there and started yelling at everybody.Finally the two kids made up then started playing together then everybody went home.
BY JAYLAN
WATSON
The second sentence is incomplete or doesn't make any sense but the rest is good.
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