On Monday September 29,2014 at Mercy hospital around 8:05 a.m a baby boy named Blaine was born. He weighed 8 pounds and 6 ounces. “He’s a chubby baby!”, said Blaine’s older brother. “Mommy he is really short too.”, said Blaine’s older sister.”He will grow taller and taller, just like you, said Blaine’s mother.Baby Blaine was born with blue eyes and reddish blonde hair, just like his father.”Mommy his eyes are really pretty.”, said Blaine’s older brother. “They look just like yours!” Said Blaine’s mother happily.
When the family of Blaine first saw him everyone heard a wave of “Awe’s”, because they thought he was just so cute! After the whole family got to hold Blaine his mother was ready to keep him all to herself. After everyone left room 50115, Blaine’s mother held him until he started getting fussy. She told Blaine’s father to see if their was any formula left, and there was. After Blaine’s father gave Blaine his bottle he looked like the happiest baby in the world, more like the happiest chubby baby in the world. In the end Blaine was just an normal baby born on a normal Monday morning.
this is so cute and the righting was very descriptive but maybe nest time add the namess of the older brother and sister. Also give a larger reaction.
ReplyDeleteFrannie that was very detailed and sounds adorable. You sure used a lot of dialogue and that helped me stay on the topic. You did a great job just always watch your spelling.
ReplyDeleteGreat, it made me want to read more, cute baby!
ReplyDeleteAwe, this is cute. You did a great job with explaining and telling what he looked like and what would happen in the future. Great job.
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