On September 22, 2014 girls p.e began playing ultimate frisbee. Angela,BreAnnes frisbee had gone over the fence. So BreAnne, Angela, Emma, and Kayla decided that the they would play together. Everything was going smoothly, until BreAnne threw a frisbee to Emma and she turned around. So the Frisbee smacked her in the back of the head. All you heard was a roaring owww from Emma , and a ton of laughtear from Angela , Kayla , and also BreAnne. Emma then picked up the frisbee and attempted to hit BreAnne but failed and hit Angelin the head. And thats how p.e class went, all of the girls got hit atleast three times it was painful but the four friends were having fun.
This is so good! I liked how you explained what emma said when she got hit with a frisbee. But you could also add just what time of the day it was. :)
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