The family never even knew he was gone. A family was doing what they did every afternoon. Boys playing video games, girls on the their phones. Their father was at work and the mom was sleeping. But, the thing the family did notice was that the littlest of the kids , a two year old boy was not home. Pretty soon on that summer of 2014, the family heard a knock on the door. The second oldest of the kids, a 12 year old boy went to open the door and was shocked when he saw his neighbor holding his baby brothers hand. According to their neighbor, he saw the baby roaming around near the train tracks and the neighbor brought the two year old back to his home. The family never left the door unlocked ever again.
This was really good but maybe add a little more detail on the reactions of the family.
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DeleteWoah! That's scary! I liked how you used detail to make it more interesting!
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