On Sept 30 2014 at Pcs,8th grade blacktop basketball teams are arguing about who gets to play with the only ball out in the court.Instead of playing together or talking it out The league just took the ball and started playing, at this point D league is furious and is yelling at people at The league.After about a minute or so D league has talked about a plan that will take the ball away and have noone play with it. As kewan shoots the ball and misses it Beydan has got the rebound and has ran out of the crowd and threw the ball to Romeo who was waiting in the corner of the court. As Romeo has the ball he throws the ball to Haris, as Haris has the ball he panicked and threw the ball back to Romeo the throw was way too hard and slipped out of Romeo’s hand. The ball is now going down hill and a crowed of people is chasing and running torward the ball. The bell rings and it is now time to go in, someone is now holding the ball and Mr.Doyle is yelling to get the ball so no more chaos like that will ever happen again. Everyone is now forced to go in for studyhall. The ball is now returned to its rightful owner and everone has a happy rest of the day.
Overall good story. Although i am in the league i can recall that we didn't take the ball. The owner of the ball Jacob was playing with us therefor we can use his own ball. You had a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Just fix that and you have a good story.
ReplyDeleteI agree with MO because the owner played in the NBA not the D-Leauge so the NBA should get the ball and the NBA usually beats the D-Leauge when they play together so there for it's kinda like the got next system in 2k when you win you keep the ball.
ReplyDeleteGood story , i liked that i was in it. At the same time i am also in the league and i didn't recall you guys taking the ball or me missing the shot. About the story you need to really look over your post. When you do that you'll have a good story.
ReplyDeleteAcually jakob was playing with us but he thought he didn't get picked up ,so i don't know why you guys were mad and just took the ball from us because you guys aint get picked up
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ReplyDeleteYou guys took the ball away from us when we were playin.......
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