This news cast is about Bryan a football player how sprain his knee. He found this out after school Monday. He is in 8th graded and his knee was very vast.Tuesday he didn't go to school because he couldn't walk.That night he had to take a pill which he think awful.
The next morning he ask,"Do I have to go to school today?" She said,"Yes!"Bryan didn't want to go to school because it was fun home alone. When he got home his mother told him that he is going to the doctor Friday.He was happy because then he will be able to play Sunday.
Next it was Thursday he had football practice but he couldn’t go, so he played games.Friday right after lunch at 1:02pm his mother came. They had to wait for 10 mins. When we got to the room they said ,”I’m going to give you a x-ray .”
its good so far but why is it in 3rd person instead of 1st person?
ReplyDeleteNice work bryan but you should edit the newscast again for some corrections
ReplyDeleteits good so far and you can add little more details.
ReplyDeleteIts good, but there is a lot of grammar errors.
ReplyDeleteIt's good but try adding a little more detail
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