Today September 17,2014 in first block it was just a normal day, we were learning about the five w's. Then Mrs.Victor came in, the class talked while Ms.Crain stepped a side to talk to her. Ms.Victor walked to the front of the class room and said "I have an announcement to make,i have done some research and found lots of evidence that boys and girls work better when they are seperated". She continued to say "you will get your new classes Friday".
The class was confused,mad,and frusterated. People started asking questions like "Is it the same for advisory"? "why are we doing this"? People were really mad and obviously did not like this idea at all. One person in my class was going to get more information about this after school.
After all of this arguing and discusing Mrs.Victor said "I have a confession to make". She continued and said "This was a trick, your not switching classes". You could tell everyone was relieved, because they were laughing some people were saing "I knew it"! After all it was just a trick.
Nice work paige. You should use commas around some sentences overall its good!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Paige! But yes I agree with Donald, you should use some more commas around sentences.
ReplyDeletegreat job!
ReplyDeleteThats funny how she tricked you guys !! Your writing is good and good dialoge, but u should use some more commas. Overall. good job!!
ReplyDeletegood job paige
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