Parents are worried these days,they worry that their kids are being bullied.Their children come home from school with bruises or black eyes.there’s probably someone getting bullied right now .Children aren't safe these days you know,I have an idea that can change that.
My idea is to kick out people that bully others.this could save lives JUST KIDDING!!!!, I call this the “Get out Project”, where I
will reach out to as many schools as possible.If you choose to join me just ask me,don’t really ask me because I made up most of this newscast. forreal
omg jaden why would you say that but anyways i liked how you put your details
ReplyDeleteYou have good details. You need to put transition words. B ut you can write more and be for real.
ReplyDeletewhy is I so short and remember professional language jaden .. I think it's funny but it should be longer and it should stay on topic .. what are you reaching out to ? stay clear... forrealllll ? realllly ..
ReplyDeleteFunny but be a litlllle more descriptive but good newscast
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ReplyDeleteGood job Jaden I really liked it.
DeleteYou should learn how to capitalize and punctuate better. Also, I think it should be longer and explain what you think the problem is, and why is it such a big problem.
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