On September 23rd our news crew visited PCS gym. A fourth grader named Marlo was in the gym at that time. Every time he ran passed that same girl, he smiled at her. A reporter got a moment to talk to Marlo 1on1. The reporter asked him was that his girlfriend. Of course like an average 4th grader he said no. I asked him a second time did he have a crush on the girl and he finally gave the reporter the answer of yes. That's the report.
short and sweet but gets right to the point i like it good job!
ReplyDeleteit was good and short .
ReplyDeleteNicely worded, it was short and sweet like previous comments said, nice job kii.
ReplyDeleteAwwhh that's cute. This newscast is short and pretty great
ReplyDeleteNice job on getting into the setting and nice details.
ReplyDeletegood job but try to make it longer next time
ReplyDeleteits a great start to the story but i think i need little more detail
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