Kids at pcs are getting detention. Some of the kids think that it is not far for the teachers to write them detentions. A couple of boys had received detentions. The boys had all written appeal forms. And they were waiting to see what will happen. A man name Mr.Doyle did not read the appeal forms. So the boys had to sever their detentions. And at the beginning of the school year Mr.Doyle said that everybody that whoever writes an appeal form would get a meeting with the teacher that wrote it.
The next day a couple of girls receive a detentions because a girl told a girl bless you because she sneezed. And it was silent halls in the 6th grade pod. And the girls tried to explain what happen but the teachers did not want to hear it. So they wrote an appeal form. And then that same day that got a meeting with Mr .Doyle and the teacher that wrote it.
The boys that did not get there meeting was mad because they said it seem like all the girls are getting are getting their meetings and not the boys.
You did a very good job adding a lot of detail, but I think you should check your work before you publish next time.
ReplyDeleteI like your topic, but you need to check you work before publishing there is a lot of mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good topic to talk about, but you should check your work before publishing. The organization goes all over the place.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of spelling and grammar errors. Also, when you write an appeal form, you don't serve the detention until Mr.Doyle talks you about it.
ReplyDeletegood over all but few spelling errors many can probably relate.
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