Jane is a rebel. She likes to party,drink, and smoke. Because of her behavior she is not exactly known for being a nice person. She is often really disrespectful to anybody especially towards her parents. Jane likes to lie to her parents so she can get out of the house. I was surprise that her nose was not growing like Pinocchio. Her parents knew she was lying but know that if the were to say something, it would end up being an hour of arguing back and forth. So Jane’s parents always kept to themselves until one night. Jane just came home from partying until 2am. She tried to be as quiet as possible but that didn’t happen . BUSTED. “WHY DO YOU ALWAYS LEAVE THE HOUSE JANE YOUR DAD AND I WORRY ABOUT YOU EVERY SINGLE NIGHT!”,yelled Ms.Smith ( Jane’s mom). “ WE WORRY ABOUT YOUR SAFETY HOW DO WE KNOW IF YOU ARE BEING KIDNAPPED THAT IS WHY YOU TELL US WHERE YOU ARE GOING SO WE KNOW !” exclaimed Ms.Smith. “ I am 16 years old I don’t need you guys . You guys never did anything for me . ANYTHING .You guys hate me.’, said Jane. By then Jane ran out the door ( mind you she just got home from a party so shes drunk). She then decide to take her BMW for drive . She didn’t know where she was going she just wanted to get away. She was driving for 5 minutes but didn't realize that a car ran a red light so therefore they crashed and Jane died moments later after being in the hospital. Basically this newscast is about not drinking and driving. This is based on a true story that has happened to an reporter’s brother best friend.
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Friday, October 17, 2014
Drunk Driving
Jane is a rebel. She likes to party,drink, and smoke. Because of her behavior she is not exactly known for being a nice person. She is often really disrespectful to anybody especially towards her parents. Jane likes to lie to her parents so she can get out of the house. I was surprise that her nose was not growing like Pinocchio. Her parents knew she was lying but know that if the were to say something, it would end up being an hour of arguing back and forth. So Jane’s parents always kept to themselves until one night. Jane just came home from partying until 2am. She tried to be as quiet as possible but that didn’t happen . BUSTED. “WHY DO YOU ALWAYS LEAVE THE HOUSE JANE YOUR DAD AND I WORRY ABOUT YOU EVERY SINGLE NIGHT!”,yelled Ms.Smith ( Jane’s mom). “ WE WORRY ABOUT YOUR SAFETY HOW DO WE KNOW IF YOU ARE BEING KIDNAPPED THAT IS WHY YOU TELL US WHERE YOU ARE GOING SO WE KNOW !” exclaimed Ms.Smith. “ I am 16 years old I don’t need you guys . You guys never did anything for me . ANYTHING .You guys hate me.’, said Jane. By then Jane ran out the door ( mind you she just got home from a party so shes drunk). She then decide to take her BMW for drive . She didn’t know where she was going she just wanted to get away. She was driving for 5 minutes but didn't realize that a car ran a red light so therefore they crashed and Jane died moments later after being in the hospital. Basically this newscast is about not drinking and driving. This is based on a true story that has happened to an reporter’s brother best friend.
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great job!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis was really good! Just remember to stay third person. You used an "I" at the beginning of your story. I liked the lesson you taught though.
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ReplyDeleteThis is really good, but just like Mishelska said, remember to stay third person.
ReplyDeleteThats such a sad story but really well written
ReplyDeleteI agree with Susie. (Idk why my other comment disappeared)
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