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Friday, October 17, 2014

Problems with people losing their money


                       There has been a problem with people losing their money to go on the middle school trip. Last year this kid lost his money and the school did nothing to try and help this kid get his money back. It was a tragic situation. This kid didn’t get to go on the trip because of him losing his money.In the end he did get his money back from what he already paid sence he didn’t get to go on the trip because he lost his money.   
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  1. UnknownOctober 17, 2014 at 10:06 AM

    I liked it.

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  2. UnknownOctober 17, 2014 at 12:10 PM

    you did good on how the kid felt i like it

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  3. UnknownOctober 18, 2014 at 7:25 AM

    You did a very good job, but you could put more detail, dialog, and evidence.

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  4. UnknownOctober 19, 2014 at 5:12 PM

    Good job. You used good detail, and feeling. The one thing is you used he and this kid a lot.

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  5. UnknownOctober 20, 2014 at 3:27 PM

    You should add a little more but it was good also since is spelled wrong

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  6. UnknownOctober 21, 2014 at 3:17 PM

    I liked the story but that sucks for the kid

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