Fellow 8th graders, If you think choosing a high school is easy, wait until you get at least 10 choices in your head. Choosing a high school is like two undefeated teams going against each other. No one knows who going to win. Here's a look of that situation:
It was a long day in math class, as an 8th grader, Donald, was struggling and nervous on choosing a high school. He had a tired,impatient expression on his face during the whole school day. It seemed exactly like high school night when he had the ONE chance to impress all the high schools in the city. He was still wondering until when his other friend, Matt, came by to tell his opinion. “Dude, it does not take that long to try & pick a high school. Just go to ~~~~~~~~~~~high school with me and it will be fine!” “If you think its that easy just watch and see. You are going to regret it.” he said. Donald finally decided his high school., It was already summer when he got accepted.He was packed already for school. Over a few months, he checked the school and he actually liked it. Everything he did was amazingly nice! It had soo many characteristics he wanted. Finally, it had been his dream to find his high school that he fitted in. All that time he had put in his life, came in and played an important role in his 8th grade year. Matt came over his house and decided to tell him about his school. He looked like he had been the victim of a bully. “I HATE MY SCHOOL! They have the worst teachers, bad food. dirty bathrooms, and weird dress code!” “You see, if you would have took your time and check out the other high schools with me, you would have been fine” Donald replied.”Maybe you are right. I think I should go to your school...” Matt said. “Yeah hopefully” And they both had a laugh. Take your time on choosing a high school. It will be worth it.
uhmm i liked your newscast sir ... like your details GREAT JOB that was so true
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DeleteI really liked your choice of vocabulary. Nice grammar too. Also you had a good choice of topic considering were in 8th grade . I think it gives a good message to the students.
ReplyDeletei agree with Haris you have a good point and rushing things is not what we as the whole 8th grade should be doing. i like the overall message "take your time"
ReplyDeleteYou gave a great description of what it is like, mister. Good job!
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