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On September 17, 2014 a lady Ms. Frugo the head of the school came in our classroom in language arts class and she in came then she started to say there were going to be some bad news for middle school. Some people in the class were scared of what Ms. Frugo was going to talk about to us. And the bad news was that the middle school trip was going to be cancel because of budget and the gradation and the dances to. A girl in the classroom was surprise because what Ms. Frugo was talking about in the class. Someone was feeling sad because that person wanted to still have the dances and the trip.And other people in the class was mad or sad also and some people made faces. Even the teacher of language arts was surprised. Then Ms. Frugo had to leave the classroom and she did. After that everyone in the classroom were talking about the bad news. Then the Language arts teacher came to the front of the classroom and told us that the mad news was a treat. Everyone in the room was surprised of what the Language arts teacher said about the treat. There was a person that could not belive what was happening.There were people that would not stop thinking that it was a treat.
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ReplyDeleteYou are really specific on what you are talking about in your story.
ReplyDeleteI like that you captured the drama of the moment. Because I was not there, I am not sure what exactly happened at the end. When the teacher said that it was a treat, that made me wonder if they were just joking about the trip being cancelled. I don't understand why the teacher said that it was a treat.
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