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Friday, October 17, 2014

Locker Problem

                            Locker Problem



There is a big problem in PCS it is locker for 6th, 7th ,and 8th.The 8th graders they are too big and locker are too small.Then boy take to long talking to friends. So the bottom locker are are almost late to class everyday.Some 8th grade boys get unwanted thing on there back or head start to fight. For girls they have too much thing in their locker not a lot of space.


For 7th graders some of them need to know how to do their locker combo then get into class on time.One kid said,”That how small the locker is so he had to jam it in ,and his thing kept falling out.” As some people say,”That 7 and 8th graders need bigger lockers.” Then the 7th be stand on top of each other because the are too big  to be under someone.

Now 6th their bigger problem is  opening their  locker they often need help. We should had started putting combo  doing the summer. So some of the kid are late but get waring because it their first year with lockers. Some of them are small so it a lot of room between them.One kid said ,” That he was late to all his class the first two weeks. That is the problem with locker.

8 comments:

  1. I like how you added a lot of detail, but your grammar and punctuation was a little off.

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  2. I liked how you gave examples from around the whole middle school.

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  3. I liked your details and how you expressed your feelings!

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  4. I think it could be a little bit longer next time.

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  5. you should fix some grammer and also i like the issue you addressed as it being the small lockers that bother me as well! great job

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  6. I agree with amaya but you need to work on grammer

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  7. Nice job expressing your feelings with details. But you should check you grammar other then that awesome job!!

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