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Friday, October 17, 2014

The Cheater

The Cheater

School, full of laughs, friends,fun times,and even relationships. Some last a long , loyal time period. Some last an average 2 weeks with problems. Jakob Lambrdo is one of those people that faced that problem. When he was in the 7th grade he asked Betty to the middle school dance.

Jakob says “I was thirsty , thought I need it a glass of water.” But soon Betty got tired of being in a “dull and lame relationship.” Betty says. Jakob Says “It hurts, It was like I had a fine glass of water in my hand and it just broke. So people are going to feel how I feel.People are going to feel the pain also.”

Jakob went on a rampage, punching teachers and students. Jakob was like a lion out of the jungle , damaging anything that got in his way. Jakob told his best friend Max that he might not make it back. Jakob was angry and he had one thing on his mind ; find Adrian. Jakob hunted for Adrian, asking people where he was.


Once Jakob walked out the bathroom he found Adrain talking to Betty. Jakob told his friend Robbie that it was his time to make his move. Robbie wanted no part of anything so he ran like it was track. Jakob walked up to Adrian and without a word, threw a hard right hook into Adrain jaw. Jakob never fought in his life so his right hand hurts like crazy.

Once Adrian got up he kicked jakob dead in the ribs. Jakob went off crying that day and swore that he was going to get Adrian back. The next day jakob found Adrain in the bathroom and put his head in the bathroom toilet. Adrian got tired of all of that so he wrote a bully form. Then an administrator Called Jakob in the office to talk about the fight. They each got to tell their side and both got suspended for 3 days.


When Betty found out she broke down in tears. She went to her friend Maurnice looking for a shoulder to cry on. Maurnice said she couldn't  help her at that moment because she was planning something for her and her handsome boyfriend 2 month anniversary. Betty didnt no what to do so she just broke down in the middle of the hallway yelling “WHY ME?”  


14 comments:

  1. This is very great. I love your topic. :)

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  2. Action packed story,but like 95% of this didn't happen

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  3. Oh i forgot Sir, You spelled my name wrong

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  4. The story was very entertaining. I liked how you added in a lot of details!

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  5. before i start off but thats a lot of lies maybe make u story true next time? but great topic.

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  7. it sounds good but i dont think jakob could or would ever hit anything

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  8. Great FICTIONAL story.

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  9. Good story but maybe next time tell a truthful story?

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