THE ROBBERY
On September 30 2014 at California ave a robbery happened. Others were scared and frightened and even worried about the person who were robbed. The police came rushing down the street to try and stop the crooks.Some people saw them run down the street following the cops in there cars. It is unknown if they were caught but some of the residence were able to give a description of the crooks. One of them were wearing a grey hoodie and gray pants in white shoes.The other was wearing a green shirt in blue pants and grey shoes.They were both males and African American and teenagers.
Keep a lookout for them and when you see them call 911 they are both armed and dangerous, and lock all doors and windows to keep your stuff safe. And stay out of trouble for your own safety.
I like how you put all of this together but you should put spaces between sentences
ReplyDeleteI think you should of added a little more space in between your sentences.
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