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Thursday, October 2, 2014

Presentation fail

On September 23, 2014 it was Nancy and Yuliana’s presentation day for Mrs. Garcia advisory. Nancy and Yuliana planned a game and thought the class will enjoy as well. To play the game, you write a question or dare on a sticky note. Then you fold it until its small. You will get a balloon and you put the sticky note in it. So once their advisory was done that, they went outside on the blacktop of PCS. Nancy and Yuliana gave directions, “Get in a circle and then drop your balloons in the middle of this circle” . The wind was blowing the balloons toward the gate. “The balloons are getting away!” , someone yelled. So the class followed where the balloons were at and formed a circle there. The first person that popped a balloon was asked  who their favorite teacher was. That person didn’t have an answer and dropped the sticky note on the ground. The teacher announced that the time was running out. Yuliana and Nancy gasped “Were running out of time!”. Others were yelling out “hurry up” to who ever was going to pop the balloon. They only got through 3 people. So now all of the class was popping the balloons without answering the question or dare to hurry up. Then they picked up their trash and went inside. Nancy and Yuliana talked about how their game was a catastrophe. So the next time they know to plan with in the certain time they have to do the activity wisely and enjoyable. 

13 comments:

  1. AHAHAHA. Yeah I agree the game was like pandemonium . I love how you wrote in great detail!

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  2. I like how you wrote about what happened in advisory

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  3. I agree with Allen. I liked how you told about what happened.

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  4. that must have sucked how far did u have to chace the balloons?

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  5. YEA i agree with Nancy Kong i like how you gave great awesome detail about the story

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  6. I liked the detail! You also used an interesting story!

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  7. You did a very good job, but you left out the part when people kept kicking the balloons out of the circle.

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  8. You did a very good job i like how you used what people said to show there mood in the story.

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  9. A pretty interesting story, but i noticed you had a lot of run on sentences. Maybe because you were in a hurry. I would take your time next time.

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