Today September 19,2014 two African american males were caught fighting on the side walk of Gravios Ave over money that was owed to a friend. The person who loaned his friend the money desperately needed it, now.
The two males who where fighting were close friends. The person who owed the money was about 5'9 with dreads. The male who lended the money was about 5'11 with an afro. Now he really needed that money, so friendship came second.
"Give me my money",the person who lended it screamed.
"Its not the end of the month yet" the person who owed him shouted.
That's not the worst part. There where many people who witnessed the event, including a police officer who clearly saw the event occur. He turned a blind eye as well as the fifteen other people who where there to.
Suddenly, the fighters started swinging baseball bats, and throwing bricks.
It didn't help that the audience was screaming inappropriate words and encouraging the fight to continue. The two fighters where seriously injured.
This issue happens all the time. When people crowd around a fight it only makes the problem worse. The officer who saw the issue and just drove by didn't do his job.
Thats really interesting. Some words are mis spelled but overall, you did good telling the story
ReplyDeleteThis does happen a lot, and it's sad that the officer did that! He is not the only one that does is not that either! This doesn't mean that every cop is like that though, keep that in mind.
ReplyDeleteI think thats horrible that the officer wasnt any help to the situation. Your writing was very good and you were very discriptive and had lots of digaloge in ur story good job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you were very descriptive of the physical features of the people involved. Your title caught my attention. I really enjoyed your blog.
ReplyDeleteYou really caught my attention with the amount of detail you put in. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteIt is very detailed and I think that it was wrong for that officer was just watching them fight and didn't do anything. He could have at least kept the fight under control and call for backup.
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